Ok that was hilarious.
Not normal of me to give anything a 5, but the facial expression you had while saying "AWESOME" was priceless. And the whole time I have been on Newgrounds, I have never checked out the store. Got me an Angry Faic keychain...AWRIIIGHT!
I like this series
I think it was your cactus episode that got you front page which is what caught my attention to watching all of them. The story idea is original, the animation is fluid, and the humor present. I think honestly the only problem with it is that they tend to begin and end exactly as all the other ones do. This one actually ditched the beginning sequence but still had the same ending and I think it is getting pretty stale with your viewers.
It is a good series though, and you really shouldn't stop just because you haven't gotten the score you wanted. Hell that sounds like a plea to get people to vote higher for you. And that never works. Think about it this way, most people that see this are probably 18 and younger. The attention span of that audience is so bad that they may not even get through the first 10 seconds before saying, "this sucks, change it" These are not hollywood critics, they know nothing of screenplay, most likely know nothing about flash, and probably don't even know how to vote fairly.
I gave this one a 4/5 as I did with every one of your other tunes in this series. And that is a high score for me. I only land someone a 5 if what they did has that "wow factor". I don't care about how well it is animated, sound quality, acting, or anything else. It is all about how you tell the story. You tell your story very decently and I even feel kinda bad for poor Jose since he keeps getting nabbed every time. And your ideas for how he tries to get to America are humorous. So don't quit because a few people give you low scores.
Hah Hah
Great movie. It actually looks like you did some research on these little guys. The camel spider(wind scorpion) belongs in the whip scorpion family which are actually tail-less scorpions. the have no claws except a couple of palps which are a tad sticky. They do actually chase soldiers around simply because they are trying to get in the shade. They are aggressive little buggers and have one the the most powerful bites of all the different bugs. I found a couple of these before and they are pretty fun to have. Great job.
Thank you! Yeah, I read that their fangs are bigger than their head-- something only found is this species.
LoL
Ok that was actually pretty damned funny.
IMO you gotta stick with your original artwork. Just touch it up a bit. While watching this I couldn't help but to think of Aqua Teen Hunger Force. Since the animation and comedy style seemed really similar to it. And the barbarian wearing a thong...HAH HAH HAH!
Your style was great, this piece looked very original and it is nice to see a bit of fresh comedy.
The sound was crisp and clear. I had no trouble trying to distinguish what the characters were saying.
Violence? Buggah!
Interactivity took no play concerning this toon so dont pay attention to the zero...Not applicable.
Nice job. Clean animation and good humor...4/5
Honest opinon?
Looks like you the just tweened the whole thing. And the sound effects was the battle scene from the animatrix just done in flash with different characters.
You did a great job at the timing though. everything looked like it fit in and nothing really seemed out of place...well except for the f-22s. at first I thought they were flying together in a formation and then they were shooting at eachother, so I couldn't tell who's side was who's.
The graphics were all right. Your artwork on the vehicles and backgrounds were not plain and it looked like you took a little bit of time to get into details.
Style was rated a 4 because the sound was from a movie that you only built your flash on top of. So since the basis for your flash was not from your creativity, I can't give a higher score.
The sound seemed kind of muffled. But that is not a big deal, looks like you just turned the quality down which kept your file size smaller.
The violence...allthough there was quite a bit of it, it mainly consisted of scratchy live feeds and red swipes for blood.
Pay no attention to the zeros on humor and interactivity. Since there is no N/A selection to choose that is all I can give along with an explanation.
Overall, not a bad flash. Nothing spectacular either, but it showed enough effort to be a save. I scored this with a 2/5. Don't take it personal, I am pretty hard when it comes to judging. You look like you have some flash skills. Keep on practicing and I am sure you will turn out with something great.
Just thought I would share this...
I spit Pepsi alover my keyboard when the guy/girl or whatever it was got its head knocked off by the mailbox. Such a subtle bit of comedy made me laugh my ass off. great movie you guys. 4/5
Very good
Remember kids, when she catches you with a condom on the first date, "it's so you can spank it on the way home without making a mess in your car". as if she is going to believe anything else, it may just get a good laugh and put her back in the mood.
Great movie man. your animation was smooth, the sound was mostly clear, and the storyline was excellent. Very nice job 4/5
very creative
this is the first 5/5 i have given anyone in quite a while. it has to be one of the most original pieces i have seen for quite some time. the animation was clean, the sound was great, and the level of interest kept me watching without waiting for it to end. great job and all awards given for this flash was well deserved.
great movie fellas
6th episode now, i guess that constitues afd as a fad now. gonna have to creativley do yourselves in too in the next next episode =)
keep up the great work.
I've been saying it all day. I want someone to parody AFD.
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Tom Fulp Experience 
Bring a Condom on a Date? 
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